Few first comments from a read through the first half. Will try and have a look at the rest later on, although I won't be able to test out many of the steps as I'm not properly set up on Databricks.

Looks good. I've looked through everything and only remaining comment would be to add a line at the end saying if there's anything aside from staging, committing, pushing and pulling that you can do from within Databricks? Doesn't need to be detailed guidance, but just a line saying either "You can also use more advanced git functionality such as detaching the HEAD, reverting commits, etc within Databricks by using the X [GUI/functionality/interface]" or "To perform more advanced git functionality such as A, B, C, we recommend cloning locally and using a bash terminal" would probably be helpful.

Although I've read through the databricks instructions, I can't perform them, so would be good for @chfoster to also review if she hasn't already.

Think these are my last two comments!